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Post by Hope on Sept 6, 2009 9:02:29 GMT -5
This story was the first submitted for Issue 2, and explores issues of domestic abuse, fresh starts, and relationships. The plot is believable, and doesn't cheat, and the heroine shows common sense as well as pluck, illustrating the difference between drama (which this is) and horror (which this could easily have been if the heroine had been stupid.)
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geo
Dragonrider
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Post by geo on Sept 6, 2009 12:07:43 GMT -5
Hope beat me to it. But I agree. This was written well enough to scare the pants off me, but real enough to keep me reading.
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Deb
Weyr Representative
Haven
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Post by Deb on Sept 6, 2009 19:15:14 GMT -5
My humble thanks.
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