K'tern (Rough Draft)

[Anna]

RE: Flying 'Fall. Nope, no way, nada, ain't gonna happen. Being blind in one eye is sufficient handicap that there's no way and Pern's green earth that D'ven would put that dragon in the sky during Threadfall.

RE: Hatching info. Choose your clutch!

18.05.08--4/30/92
Graduation: 19.09.08
Lanarth/Lynneth #10
Mating Flight: 18.01.06
Clutching Date: 18.04.02
Total Eggs: 29
Gold: 1 Bronze: 2 Brown: 5 Blue: 9 Green: 12
gold Wenth, Danwa (WNPC) -- Deceased
bronze Jarroth, D'rien (WNPC)
brown Jeseth, Jaele (WNPC)
blue Ragnorath, Chessney (WNPC)
blue Rianth, M'zor (WNPC)
green Iieth, L'zena (WNPC)
green Lisadeth, Colanna (April Masters)
green Thaylith, F'lerin (Kris Dotto)

18.07.03--6/20/92
Graduation: 19.11.03
*Dragon*Con Clutch*
Jerlith/Lyrissath #4
Mating Flight: 18.02.25
Clutching Date: 18.05.22
Total Eggs: 27
Gold: 0 Bronze: 2 Brown: 4 Blue: 7 Green: 14
bronze Ath, Ch'ton (WNPC)
brown Classith, T'rrell (Betty Law)
brown Mockath, Elise (Regina Kirby)
blue Graziath, Elena (April Masters)
blue Morath, N'lson (WNPC)
blue Xaborth, V'ria (WNPC)
green Blyth, Dree (WNPC)
green Calandreth, S'lel (WNPC)
green Camrith, Cirra (WNPC)
green Corynth, Tiala (WNPC)
green Graceslinth, Lirie (WNPC)
green Gwinneth, Teloa (WNPC)
green Kymryth, Aeravyn (WNPC)
green Sakaideth, Korstainje (April Masters)
green Trynoth, Keilyn (WNPC)

18.12.04--11/8/92
Graduation: 20.03.04
Lanarth/Lynneth #11
Mating Flight: 18.07.27
Clutching Date: 18.10.24
Total Eggs: 34
Gold: 0 Bronze: 2 Brown: 8 Blue: 11 Green: 12
bronze Ilwaith, Sh'no (WNPC)
bronze Kyranath, R'stin (WNPC)
brown Farath, M'lan (WNPC)
brown Seaanth, Konlea (WNPC)
brown Zonath, Jerasi (April Masters)
green Hannilith, Zarita (WNPC)

18.13.27--12/29/92
Graduation: 20.04.27
Vangarth/Lyrissath #5
Mating Flight: 18.09.16
Clutching Date: 18.12.18
Total Eggs: 21
Gold: 0 Bronze: 1 Brown: 4 Blue: 10 Green: 6
blue Amarilloth, Kymas (WNPC)
green Aganth, Kamala (WNPC)

[geo]

I just realized something. All of those dates are in the year I was born. I'll be using the latest date. So 18.13.27.

Thank you and your story will be in soon as I drag myself back to it's page to get through the rest of it.

[Hope]

May 24, 2009 18:55:18 GMT -5 geo said:

I just realized something. All of those dates are in the year I was born. I'll be using the latest date. So 18.13.27.

OK, raise your hand if that made you feel really, really old.

That was the year Charles and I got engaged, I was in my second year of medical school, and I finally got my braces off. (Note: it is counter-productive not to wear your elastics and retainer if you ever want to finish with the #$%@^&$%# things.)

[geo]

Amen to the braces comment...

Still writing, though I should probably finish the character first. =D

[Hope]

Don't feel bad. I just realized that, although Garafille's first story is submitted and accepted, her character sheet has never been written, let alone posted. Ooops....

[geo]

Hehehehe.

Final Draft is up, first post.

[Hope]

I Like It!

There are a few small typos, but I'm personally not terribly worried by that in a character sheet. It seems very good and very reasonable; the only thing I would question would be Graerth's scars still being red. I am not even remotely an animal expert, but in people, old scars usually fade to white. Keloid type scars may be raised in crests of tissue, but usually still not red after a decade or more has passed; more ordinary scars will pull tissue into the scar, causing dimpling or deformity. Our resident veterinarian may be able to comment.

We like to leave these up for a little while to allow people time to post comments, but I'd be surprised if there were any requests for significant changes before this goes to the approved section. Good job on your first character! Now I want to see a story!